michelleteo
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Remote Ctrld
Trash Pandas
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Remote Ctrld
^ Thanks for the feedback! I totally agree, I was a bit worried about a few things being too ambiguous as we ran out of time to add in certain elements to help the story along a bit. She is the girlfriend, yep - in the photo, sending the txts and appearing at the end. I love your interpretations! But you were right with your second idea - that the app had controlled her and then used her to control him. Basically, the ending is supposed to be us finding out that the same thing happened to her (hence her being test subject 112 and him being 113) and that the app itself had taken over and passed it along to him - you'll see when the app takes control of him, on his phone it says "Accessing contacts..." which is supposed to be the sort of giveaway that the app was looking for it's next victim(s) :) BUT the shot ended up not being super clear or long enough and I also wanted it to say something a LITTLE bit more obvious (e.g. "Sending automated messages to contacts...") buuut again - ran out of time haha. Really appreciate your comment! Always good to know what I can work on. :)
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Wow - really enjoyed this! Loved the choice to go silent, works really well here. Great music and there's some really great camera work going on as well - I especially enjoyed your use of the arc shot, perfectly placed! I would only say that for some shots, the framing could have been slightly adjusted to not cut off the subject's head sometimes, that's all :) But this was a really fun watch, you should be proud.