Immune

The plot was simply too complex for a 7 minute max film. Try work on making it more simple in future years.

A guy seems to pass on some sort of virus to another and before long a very sinister looking fog is spreading across the land, killing those trapped in its path. Time seems to move very fast in this. Visually it works and the sound was at good levels. It didn't really hold my interest, however, hence I didn't write down a lot of notes about it! Ambitious certainly, with the highlight for me being a nice POV finish. nice job.

I was highly confused in this film, maybe I was supposed to be in parts, but overall I couldn't engage and it felt really long. As I've said for most teams in this heat the plot just needs to be simpler. There was however some very nice camera work at times, especially the close ups, which I always appreciate.

Cool opening shot of the guy running towards the camera. Nice portrayal of the earthquake. I particularly liked the smoke outside. Lots of laughs at the "yep" response to "Did you hear that?" Nice. Lots of cool color grading effects/style. Nice creepy music during the coughing scene. Nice exciting music when they're running through the fog...? Mist? Deadly junk? Cool visual effect with the neck thing pulsing. Very pretty sunset at the end.

The plot was simply too complex for a 7 minute max film. Try work on making it more simple in future years.