Steel Mind, Gold Heart

Normally I don't review disqualified shorts due to incompleteness, but this film was clearly complete, just late I assume. Massive step up from last year! Camerawork was good although perhaps some more attention could be paid to lighting. Sound was pretty clear for the most part. Most importantly, you delivered a very entertaining story. Yes there was some cheesiness, but it worked in your favour and the audience clearly enjoyed this short. The final gag could've been executed a little more cleanly. Editing could still tighten up. Actors generally did a pretty good job. Your villain was caught suppressing a smile a few times - always make sure to stay in character the whole time. But definitely a good attempt and I look forward to seeing what this team produces in the future. Please try to get it in on time next year!

PLEASE DON'T GET DQ'D NEXT YEAR :D

This film was sooo good. i honestly cant think of what to say about it as it was just so perfect and funny. loved the yatzee joke. such a shame you didnt come through on time. agree with problemsir!!!

Wow. You guys have progressed so much from last year! I am very impressed! Your team intro (although not judged) was awesome, it really set the audience up for a good film. And that is what you made, it was a solid and enjoyable watch. The cinematography was good, as was the lighting in the first few scenes. I did notice some editing mistakes, such as the fade-cut as the guy talking, adding a shot of something else here would have stopped this awkward transition, look up the 30 degree rule. Your story and script was pretty good and was funny enough to get quite a few laughs. Good work guys, keep it up! And try not to get DQ'd next year!

Wow. You guys have progressed so much from last year! I am very impressed! Your team intro (although not judged) was awesome, it really set the audience up for a good film. And that is what you made, it was a solid and enjoyable watch. The cinematography was good, as was the lighting in the first few scenes. I did notice some editing mistakes, such as the fade-cut as the guy talking, adding a shot of something else here would have stopped this awkward transition, look up the 30 degree rule. Your story and script was pretty good and was funny enough to get quite a few laughs. Good work guys, keep it up! And try not to get DQ'd next year!