Violin't Crime

Hi guys at Homeless Pictures! Can i just start by saying what a great effort you guys have put in! What you attempted to do with you storyline was a nice idea. However, it was unclear as to what your story was about and we only started to find out, towards the end of the film, what was going on. This was partially because we couldn't understand the audio, so next time try to budget for an external microphone. This will help enhance your audio and consequently, your storyline as it will be easier to portray your plot in the short seven minute slot. I can understand that you are given many boundaries to restrict your film within, and i think you have tried your best (crime genre is always difficult for new comers to the 48 hour long film festival). Hope to see you back again next year as you show some future potential.

This film had a rough start because of sound problems and more specifically problems with hearing the main character explaining the plan in the beginning. It was very difficult to hear what he was saying and I couldn't really understand fully their motive for stealing the violin. The humour in the story was quite a good touch and the line of dialogue was used effectively. It would have been nice to see more at the end and it felt like it was cut short (maybe due to time constraints?) Overall, not a bad job!

It was hard to hear the audio at the start, which made it hard to understand the dialogue at the start when they were planing. But much better film this year compared to last year.

Nice premise, with some good gags that you pulled off well. Story a bit hard to get into. You really need to discern what it is that's mucking up your sound as I know you're using a decent mike. Set was good and the crowd scene was pretty realistic. Camera nice and I felt you're shot choices always paid off. I felt your music was brilliant as always, but lacked a sense of cohesion. With this sort of story line the music really needs to build up to your dramatic finish gag and unfortunately I didn't feel you achieved this. Still, amazing movie one of the best of the night, I look forward to next year.

Hi guys at Homeless Pictures! Can i just start by saying what a great effort you guys have put in! What you attempted to do with you storyline was a nice idea. However, it was unclear as to what your story was about and we only started to find out, towards the end of the film, what was going on. This was partially because we couldn't understand the audio, so next time try to budget for an external microphone. This will help enhance your audio and consequently, your storyline as it will be easier to portray your plot in the short seven minute slot. I can understand that you are given many boundaries to restrict your film within, and i think you have tried your best (crime genre is always difficult for new comers to the 48 hour long film festival). Hope to see you back again next year as you show some future potential.