It's Kinda Hard To Explain

Although the story was fairly predictable, this was a pretty nice idea for an entry, quite simple and quirky, perfect for a 48 hour competition. I thought the acting overall was okay, but the dialogue was a bit disappointing as it lacked finesse; I felt that everything was a bit overplayed, whereas it should have been more subtle. You did have some good comedic moments though, such as when the lead male steps out with bloodied hands and then at the end when the phone vibrates. I think a fair 7/10 is deserved. Good work guys! Hope to see more entries from you in the future!

Needs some polish here and there but I felt the story itself was reasonably solid, you didn't try and do anything too complicated and had some nice gags in there, although the ending was predictable it was predictable in a good way in that it added some anticipation to the moment, maybe some of the performances could have been snappier and more committed but It was pretty good.

I don't know what the others mean by a predictable ending! I didn't realise what was going to happen until it did! It was a very good story, but it needed just a little more. The acting and cuts seemed a bit awkward. This had potential to be the best movie there, but you just need that little bit more to keep the audience up with it.

Although the story was fairly predictable, this was a pretty nice idea for an entry, quite simple and quirky, perfect for a 48 hour competition. I thought the acting overall was okay, but the dialogue was a bit disappointing as it lacked finesse; I felt that everything was a bit overplayed, whereas it should have been more subtle. You did have some good comedic moments though, such as when the lead male steps out with bloodied hands and then at the end when the phone vibrates. I think a fair 7/10 is deserved. Good work guys! Hope to see more entries from you in the future!