Morgan and The Moustache

I love me a good fun time travel film but this ones over reliance on ADR seriously broke the verisimilitude for me - it had me wondering what needed to be changed so much the best option was to rewrite ,most of the film. On the upside though I enjoyed the little 8-Bit section with the ghost, nice twist and a fun one that grabbed my attention. That end song though was more than a little creepy...

I had some good laughs with this film, though agree that the ADR was distracting at times, particularly when the 2 were sitting beside the river. At times it felt like too much was being explained, and at other times I was left wondering exactly what was happening. I was surprised how well the chase sequence worked. When I first heard the Idea I was very worried. Also I felt the idea of him taking over the world through brainwashing people with music didn't come through clearly enough. Maybe if James had given Morgan some earplugs when they let the building and you had a musical version of Jeremy's song playing in the background?

Although it had a few audio issues (as mentioned above), I enjoyed this one. The plot was solid and it kept me interested, even if the story-telling needed a bit of work. But I loved the way it ended. In general, nice film. Good work.

Everyone loves a good moustache. Audio issues were very distracting however. It was good to see a variety of shots and angles being attempted, and I loved the animated snippet!

I love me a good fun time travel film but this ones over reliance on ADR seriously broke the verisimilitude for me - it had me wondering what needed to be changed so much the best option was to rewrite ,most of the film. On the upside though I enjoyed the little 8-Bit section with the ghost, nice twist and a fun one that grabbed my attention. That end song though was more than a little creepy...

I had some good laughs with this film, though agree that the ADR was distracting at times, particularly when the 2 were sitting beside the river. At times it felt like too much was being explained, and at other times I was left wondering exactly what was happening. I was surprised how well the chase sequence worked. When I first heard the Idea I was very worried. Also I felt the idea of him taking over the world through brainwashing people with music didn't come through clearly enough. Maybe if James had given Morgan some earplugs when they let the building and you had a musical version of Jeremy's song playing in the background?