Charlie's

Really fab job guys, a shame it was ineligible for votes. Excellent acting, framing, and engrossing story. Well done!

The presentation was excellent as were the locations and the performances but the story I felt was lacking. You've got a bar owner trying to keep his business from going under but the bank isn't going to give him a loan. I didn't fully understand what was going on with the child either and the guys mate I'm not sure if he was dead or some sort of guardian angel and it's not really explained or hinted as to what that's about.