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I feel like there was a good concept here, but it was too confusing as to what was going on, I didn't understand the ending at all, might need a few rewatches to get it. Hard to explain the mirror/time travel concept explicitly in a few minutes without serious effects etc.

I saw your comment under the film in the screening room that you ran out of time with the script. That's good to know, it explains some of the issues, it was lacking somewhat in logical flow and I can appreciate there were things you wanted to fix. There's a somewhat interesting concept here that could have been quite good if you'd had time to iron it out.