The Intimate Photo Disaster
by Booham Brigade
A risky photo of Maddy appears in Maddy's family chat on messenger, and all the evidence points to her husband, James, as the culprit.
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I think you had the makings of something pretty entertaining here if you'd cut it back a little, speeding things up by ditching some of the dialogue in particular and ramping up the conflict between the couple. The initial set-up was good, (even if the culprit was blatantly obvious from the get-go) and there were some nice touches of humour before it all just kind of ends rather abruptly. An enjoyable watch though, a click-bait thumbnail & actually very rewatchable. Nice job!
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