Imaginary friend

I am proud of the feel good vibe and the lovely actors!

As newlyweds make their way to a rural bed and breakfast honeymoon treat, an obnoxious limo driver tries to get under their skin but they ignore the dickhead and instead settle in for a lovely celebration of their marriage with beekeeping, tennis and picnics. Only the Air BNB house is not exactly as he seems.

Firstly, good sound here including some really nice foley and from a technical point of view I enjoyed how you bathed every shot in sunlight where possibly, but your white balance was strong resulting in a warm fuzzy tone to the proceedings.

The performances were strong, selling the deep connection of the newlyweds just simply over the moon at having tied the knot. I also felt the host delivered an interesting slightly off-kilter performance.

The thing holding this back for me was a lack of dramatic urgency. Really enjoyable tone overall and some clever comedy, but even in the most lighthearted romcoms I do want to have a dramatic question driving the story because otherwise it becomes a little observational. I'm giving you an overall positive mark though as I personally enjoyed your film a great deal.

Story: 2/5
Technical: 3.5/5
Elemenets: 2.5/5
Overall: 3/5

air bnb host* not house*