At Your Fingertip

At a quarry, 4 different versions of the protagonist are told that the multiverse is right at the edge of their fingertips. Of course given these are trigger happy fingers it is a matter of who can best operate the weapons provided to take control.

Some nice shots in this film, but I felt that the story really needed more development from a narrative point of view.

Story: 1.5/5
Technical: 2/5
Elements: 2.5/5
Overall: 1.5/5

Awesome location! 10 points for not setting your film inside, and those guns were pretty filmic too.

On the technical side, you don't need me to point out things like the aspect ratio randomly switching to vertical, or superimposing signs on top of real signs (which say the same thing) don't exactly make for a good edit - all of these are charming growing pains everyone who's ever got into film will go through.

Storywise, I think some action could have been taken to make what was going on a bit clearer. The Multiverse versions of each character were cool, but something more than just a costume change could have spiced things up a bit more. Maybe they have different personalities? Voices? Hairstyles?

Broadly, on the story as well, I'm not really sure on a lot of what was going on. But again this kinda thing just adds to a delirious wonder, especially this far into the heats.

Challenge for next year: Keep practicing with your camerawork, and maybe try tell a most distinct story - a team with an imagination like this could go really far.