Lonely Man

I think you really wanted multiverse, didn't you? Be that as it may I really liked your style as our lead kept monologuing he was but a lonely man whether on stage, by the pond, getting soaked in the rain or starring in a silent film, amongst other demanding requirements.

Honestly it was very one note a one joke film but I thought you pulled it all together well with a strong lead performance and good edit in particular. The audition at the end I felt could have bookended a little better with the rest of the film, but the meltdown overweighed that.

Story: 3/5
Technical: 3.5/5
Elements: 3/5
Overall: 3/5

LOVED the shot of the actor rolling around on the floor at the end - made me chuckle. A few of the scenes felt a little flat, but it had a great editing and great pay-off at the end!